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Organ

My heart, is just an organ
delivering blood throughout
my body, I know this for
a fact. And yet, It seems
my brain decided that
the sight of you, was
more important than life
itself. I can't think of any
other reason why I feel
this way, when I'm with you.

Then again, I never let my
brain dictate what I did before.

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  • righteousme
    December 8, 2008

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    hmmm . its like you answered the prompt and in turn made a prompt of your own ...

    then again, i never let my brain dictate what i did before ...

    great . simply great . thank you so much for your time and talent in this contest !!!!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    what a lovely poem. I feel the same for you...lol

    good luck in the contest