I wanna conquer myself from tide to tide
Truly represent whats burning inside,
and beside me
Accurately articulate my tuned antenna,
to your sacred satellite
In hopes that we can collide,
and triple our light
Traveling to the inner reaches of my mind
To the center of my own sound
Into the astral realms and back around
I'll meet you in the middle of creation
We'll share stories of our separate paths to salvation,
and hum in the completion
of our collective conundrum
To finally witness our vision...
and then some
Author notes
BG artwork by me.
whats going on in your portals girls and boys?
Comments
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The background is truly incredible! Wow! You are an artist in several fields
You use some very original and pleasing vocabulary here, and yet still manage to keep the flow natural. Well done!
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Lovely!
Once again, a great touching piece that uses unusual metaphors and powerful rhymes to convey a deep fascination with love. The background is beautiful, too, but I'd drop the second placement of it -- not needed.
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you do great backgrounds it sucks that overshadows your poetry.
i do love this piece. its very well written. i love the flow here.
this is amazing. i really enjoyed reading this, thanks so much for sharing.
your Faerie
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Like the background.
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