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My Broken Soul

My broken soul
torturing me
sending me spinning
through the
darkness
killing my very
being
and hurting my
soul in the dark
and mudering my naked
body on my bed.
Please
don't
hurt me
anymore.

A contest entry

My first self-hurt poem.

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  • chilali
    December 14, 2008

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    Short and simple. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for entering and good luck.

    Much love
    Ylova