my kiss for you lit
my soul with your flame
burning for your desire
a neverending fire
no sonnets can speak
what i feel
without your goodbye
bliss' tear fills
my eye
i can die
with you in my
my heart
blissfully dead
Author notes
OPTION 4: TITLES TO SPARK YOUR MUSE
previous bliss titles inspired
A contest entry
- FAMOUS LAST WORDS AMONG A MIX OF OTHER OPTIONS by badnovocaine.
900 points, ended December 22, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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very nice
sad and sweet all together. I like this a lot and it says something that I feel love is supposed to be like! Great write and good luck in the contest! The Shaker
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no sonnets can speak
what i feel
without your goodbye
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A nice little take on the title, I actually found this title interesting, so I am glad that you wrote something for this one. It just goes to show how powerful love is, an enemy or a friend. But your forever burned by the scars, a powerful toxin
I liked this very much, even if it made my heart heavy.
Thank you for entering.
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