I find the gorgeous lady watching me closely as I play with myself in the washroom.
"Hot?" the lyrical, husky voice inquires lovingly.
"Like hell", the words come out of my mouth as if I am a bleating sheep.
"Ice cube treatment?" A bicurious never rejects an offer.
I follow my sexy guide meekly
---to her lavishly decorated apartment---
watching the beauty of her rhytmic hips.
The door of the desolate apartment is hurriedly bolted.
The curtains are drawn.
All the lights are switched off.
The fragrant candles are lit.
The voluptuous lady sheds her pieces of clothes
one by one
like the yellow leaves falling from an autumn tree.
And now the noble lady stands like a golden Goddess
who looks as seductive as Lust incarnate.
--All set to satisfy her forbidden desires
By feasting upon the freshest chic available.
Her hand gesture is more than a command for me
to strip myself off completely
from my dress of sin.
Two naked angels
with their glistening bodies
in the twinkling lights of the candles.
I'm laid down on her magnificent bed.
The wrinkles of the silken sheets
smell like the nest of many a chic like me.
The ice cubes are fetched.
They are laid on my erect nipples
in such a way that the crystal drops gather together
in my cleavage
moving down like a stream to my deep, heaving navel.
The glittering pearls
the shining ice cubes
are inserted in my hottest zone
The golden Goddess also inserts some in herself
in both the upper and lower holes
She makes an O-shaped ring with her artistic fingers
and holds it near my "mouth"
as she moves her curved tongue
anound my throbbing "lips"
--the tongue moving and constantly hissing like a hot snake
It goes deep inside me
while she keeps on gazing straight into my meekly hungry eyes
producing some non-human but lustful sounds.
The temperature goes on changing from cool to warm
from warm to hot
from hot to the boiling point.
Hours have passed...
The sucking lips of the sweet Goddess are still on my honeycomb
Her arms, breasts, nipples, tummy, thighs, legs, feet and toes are playing havoc
with my silky flesh
I'm being squeezed and kneaded
till all my heat melts into pure lava
entering her exotic mouth.
I'm licked to the last drop.
The thrill surges through my blood
and I drown in waves of absolute pleasure
unknown to a sacred soul.
A contest entry
- Calling all Favs of Paloszoo (contest) by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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... and I wasn't invited?
lol loved it ......... maybe a little too much
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now that is a fantisy i would love to be a part of...VERY sexy my love VERY...i cant wait til we do something similar...you ready for it?
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beautifulblackpoet
More than willing...
when?
where?
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Congrats on a great "Ice Cube" fantasy or even a reality. I loved the title as I have written aboout Ice cubes before. Something sexy about ice cubes and sex.
Ted E
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Ted E Bare
It's reality cum fiction. Thanks for the comment.
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bravo!
Very taboo. good write.
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hot and nipply. an absolute pleasure.
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Olea
I love it hot and nipply. That gives me lots of pleasure.
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WOW
WOW! I MEAN BIG WOW!
this is absolutely stunning!
I LOVE YOUR IMAGERY!!
this ice cube treatment might be used in my next story though I must remember to credit YOU for it!!
You are absolutely wicked!
Conrgats on the Honourable Mention!
Next time I want to have a part
WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE!
NOT AN ENCOURAGEMENT BUT AN ORDER!! LOL
Nooni 
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Wow.
I love you're style of writing!
wow. very sexual.
" I'm licked to the last drop.
The thrill surges through my blood
and I drown in waves of absolute pleasure
unknown to a sacred soul. "
Unbelieveable skill right there,
- Holly
xxx
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Very well written. Very sexual, but in a very poetic way. Good job
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Inspired By Till
comment appreciated
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mmmmm
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Naughtygrlred
Thx, gorgeous lady!
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WOW! So sensual. You are very good at these types of writes. Congrats on the HW.
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moluv10
i appreciate ur comment hun -
moluv10
i appreciate ur comment hun
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"two naked angels", this is a very sexy, sensual poem. I love all of the metaphores, "mouth", "lips"...it is very descriptive and tantilizing. Yet another excellent write!
-Garrett
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gllarso
thx 4 ur appreciation of the poem hun
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wow, that was a great erotic poem. i loved the imagery and this one part was beautiful:
All the lights are switched off.
The fragrant candles are lit.
The voluptuous lady sheds her pieces of clothes
one by one
like the yellow leaves falling from an autumn tree.
And now the noble lady stands like a golden Goddess
who looks as seductive as Lust incarnate.
gave me a pure image. great job! i loved it!
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Lexie
ur comment is very very inspiring, my noble lady. ur seductive eyes make it even more enticing
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Excellent! This was really a fantastic read. Left me squirming in my chair. It was unique and creative for my contest. I really appreciate the time you took to enter! Thank you so, so much!
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Paloszoo
squirming in your chair! wish i cd c u. thx 4 ur appreciation. may i surpise u some day by writing an erotica about u and me together my sweet lady
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holy crap. this is your best one yet love. The beginning was interesting. WOW. this is really really good!!
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shattering gyspy
ur comment inspires me to be more evil.
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I have some icecubes in my freezer!!!! This is great and I enjoyed this read
Good luck in the contest 
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hotchocolate
reserve the icecubes 4 me, u generous lady -
HOTCHOCOLATE
Don't be impatient hun. i'd be with u right at midnight. keep the door open
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