when you wait for so long and all of a sudden like the wind,. they’re gone
You gave it a second chance, but it didn't work out
now all you can do sit while your heart screams and shout
You've prayed and prayed and yet she is still gone
you try to figure how something so good, what the hell went wrong
You had so many talks to work thing s out
realizing that it did no good, now you wondering what was the relationship all about
You've cried and cried, morning, noon, and night
if you could have only given it a second chance you 'd try with all of your might
You finally gave up and dare to love again
because the one true love you thought you had has made you feel like your entire life has come to an end
What did you think
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I realy like this
I do love the flow of this and the great meaning and feelings that are in it. This is a great poem with lots of love.
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This is a very emotional poem. The word choice is very good. However, I'm slightly confused as to the structure in line five...but that's just me. other than that, well done. Keep Writing! -Liz
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like your narrative style and the incorporation of rhyme. Nice writing.
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