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from the days of our younger  years.
Imaginations flowing as we were growing,
Teasing the fate of time .
As, like with nursery rhymes .
We used to look in the sky for signs.
We thought  that the sun,stars and sun knew.
Staring at the blackness deep .
Neither one of us you could hear a peep.
Pause ,inhale,looked up at the secrects we keep.
Anger sorrow woe! as , the world goes through so much.
What on earth can these two little kids know!
We giggle and laugh!she was from the future I was from the past!
The truth is aghast !

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