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Not worth it

Whisper your words in my ear
Your voice low
Harsh
Like sandpaper
Scraping against sensitive nerves
Vibrating like the church bells

Whisper of love
Divine, unending love
flowing into eternity
And the fate that brought us together
Always leaving it to fate

Erotic visions
How they pour off your tongue
As you tell me where
Where to put your hands
Where to put my mouth
Where you want my tongue
Words intended to set me afire

Only make me cringe inside
Words you said to a hundred others
This voice you used so may other times
I am supposed to swoon
Make love to me

Enter me like a robber in a bank
And exit with my dignity in hand
Yes please, I beg you
Take everything I have
Leave your marks on my body
Your scent in my hair
And your memory
Please

Leave me a broken, shattered woman
Begging for more
Simply because I'm not worth it

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    December 7, 2008
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    this is good, especially stanza 4 which is very strong

    great work Ash

    al