She was dancing on stage
and we are watching her.
She is petite with large breasts.
Silicon no doubt.
Garment by slinky garment
falls off of her body,
She turns and smiles
at my friend and I.
Shows the cheek of her ass.
My mind slithers like a snake
between her legs.
A dollar bill wavers
and she gets closer,
She raises her pink panties
and exposes her clitoris
a little gold ring
shines from one labia.
She licks her lips
as she plays with the ring
sending waves of fantasy
from her mind into ours.
Her eyes promising
a wild ride
between her tan thighs
We immerse deeper
in lustful fantasy.
In this room
with this music
alcohol and women
hunger is being fed.
She dances away from us
and we feel betrayed
The rest of the clothes fall away
and she crawls with dangling breasts
to another man in fantasy
and a fat wallet.
She will stay in our memories
and appear when we make love
to our wives when things have gotten old.
Somewhere down the road of life,
though she has forgotten us
we get our money’s worth.
In a list
A contest entry
- Erotic/Sensual Poem/Background! Take a LOOK!!! by Zenda-Lokki.
550 points, ended December 11, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very steamy indeedy!!
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That was amazing...Probably one of the best i've read in a while.
"In this room
with this music
alcohol and women
hunger is being fed."
That little section was utter brilliance.
The way the poem's written, it sounds like the contemplative musings of a man in a strip club, which contradicts what one would think it would sound like. But oddly enough, it's perfect for this poem.
Great job on it, really. Good luck in the contest!
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that's all I can say to this one.
and
whew.
Love
jin
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something heated my friend, something really heated, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.
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