Love is sharing a peanut butter
and jelly sandwich,
making him believe
it’s the best thing in the world,
even though you know
you’re allergic to peanuts
but you do it anyway,
just because his eyes sparkle
and cause your heart to feel
as if you’ve just won the Olympics.
Author notes
Option 1 Write about love
In a list
A contest entry
- love. by luna-midnight.
1000 points, ended December 24, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ha i like this one yeah i am new so if you can pass by my page read a poem and tell me what you think id like that.. but yeah this poem is like so cool...
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loved this poem very much it was a great poem you hit the hammer right on the nail love is so great but it can be the worsed to
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I love reading anything that sounds natural to my ear and your down to earth reflections on love are refreshing; they blow a breath of fresh air across a landscape littered with over emphasis on flowery descriptions of love
Margaret
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thank you again for your graceous thoughts on my scribbles, I'm pleased you enjoyed this silly take on love
many blessings, Sandi
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Love is enjoying dancing with your sweetie, even when he steps on your feet. Eating something I am allergic to is beyond my tolerance, but I understand and love the glint in his eye. Good luck!
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giggling here, I actually did this silly thing, but only once...ah the things we do when we're young and don't know any better!
Thank you my dear friend!
love and blessings,
Sandi
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ahmen to the peanut butter and jelly sandwhich.lol. this was so enjoyable and cute, good luck and thanks for entering
Stephanie ♥ -
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Thank you Stephanie for your kind thoughts, it was a pleasure to write for you
blessings, Sandi
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