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life- don't talk to me about life

life- don't talk to me about life
I know all about it
is there a more depressing thing?
I truthfully doubt it

i'm just a menial robot
with a brain the size of a planet
and achy diodes all down my left side
and everyone tells me to can it

I'm not getting you down, am I?
nobody really likes me
it hurts to think down to your level
how the headache of it strikes me

the universe is bloody stupid
with all it's ugliness and strife
Oh god, i want to short circuit
life-don't talk to me about life



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  • anoetic poet
    December 12, 2008
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    Funny, and well-written! Good luck in the contest!


  • vampira1665 silver member
    December 9, 2008

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    LMAO, I liked this piece. Just got done reading a bunch of beautiful, slow down, look around poems and this woke me up and made me laugh. Thanks!!!

    Hugs and bites,
    vampi