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how do I know love?

How do I know love?
To love is to imagine forever, to look in someones eyes and get lost, feel your knees fail you. To love is to make a fool of yourself and not care about the consequences.
I know I am in love when I know I would cut off my arm to see them smile, when at a whim I would die for them.
I know I am in love when I sense them entering a room, and the thought of a simple kiss is all I need to go on.
I mean no cliches, I have felt this way for one, and one has felt this way for me. its a feeling that no matter how hard you try, you will never forget.
Do I really know love?
I would like to think so, but to explain in any form, is like explaining color to the blind.
Love is something we all feel differently, yet so many the same.
How do i know love?
I just do.

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love is crazy complicated

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Love is Powerful by: Eruvande Almare
Untouchable by: Mistress Claire

Written February 7th, 2004

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  • GypsyEyes
    January 6, 2008

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    hey this is really good! i liked your emotion in it! thank you for entering my contest! good luck!
    ~NineTailedFox


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    May 10, 2006
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    this is great from you and it sounds like you really love someone very much. i think i want to keep my arm if at all possible but i do want love like this too. good luck in love and this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie langager


  • xxxFiGhTiNgBaCkxxx
    May 10, 2006
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    wow this poem is amazing keep up the good work!
    Jennifer Michelle


  • Abby Eyeball
    December 13, 2004
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    Man, I liked how you ended this. It is so exactly true that "Love" is different in different aspects to everyone. It is quite a tough thing to describe, which is why I held this contest, because I wanted to know if someone could come up with a mere definition for "Love". And as I've noticed, there are a lot of differences This piece rocks! Though, I don't know about cutting my arm off just to make someone smile. I'd smack them, or tickle them, but cut off my arm? Are you insane??!!

    Abby Eyeball


  • candy177
    April 6, 2004
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    How do you explain love? How do you explain color to a blind person...or music to a deaf person? I believe none of these questions can easily be answered. As far as being in love - you just know. I know that feeling - it's not something that can easily be explained. Your words are so touching, so true. Great job on this and good luck in the contest!

  • Karen Michelle
    February 26, 2004
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    Brilliant!

    Very good outlook on love. I love the way that this poem is based around the one question - 'how do I know love?'

    You make your points very well and I like how at the end you haven't really come to the one conclusion - you just say 'I just do' - I don't believe that love can be fully explained - it's one of those great mysteries of life. I think your poem sums this up very well - love is very different depending on who you are.

    Brilliant poem. I enjoyed your viewpoint. Thankyou for entering it into the contest.


  • queenie
    February 9, 2004
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    all-around great.

    a simple view without restraints and complications.you have loved and you have captured the way you define love in a down to earth way.this is a well-written piece and it shows a very interesting point of view.concise and precise.short and to the point.a great point you made as well.good luck


  • gaiascully
    February 7, 2004
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    "i have felt this way for one, and one has felt this way for me."
    i just must say that its a pitty that they are not one and the same. life is a very complicated thing, and love is ever more complicating. yet something we all need


  • gaiascully
    February 7, 2004
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    thank you for your comments, i so appriciate them. and it is hart felt for me, because i write what i know and feel, nothing more nothing less. thanks


  • Rev Alimae gold member
    February 7, 2004
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    I believe you have opened, even if it is a small crack, a window into what true love is all about. This is very heart felt and thought out, and if it is not then it comes across that way to me. Thank you for entering this piece and I hope that you win.
    Alimae


  • Enchanted Soul
    February 7, 2004
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    Wow, this was the first entry I read and I am glad because it fits perfectly for the contest. I am glad to know that for you true love exsist and that you have no doubt. The greatest feeling in the world and yet just a word, "love" be yours. I aprecieate your entry very much and thank you. Good luck in my contest.

    ~squeekers, lord of the underwolrd squirrels~~

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