Here:
built of childrens' eyes
peering innocence,
I was,
her.
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10words.
injected of me.and hospital treatment, the soul dies.
luna-midnight
A contest entry
- Describe yourself once more in 10 words {Round 2 } by Noir mariposa...x.
700 points, ended January 5, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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My darling this is beautifully sad
Very deep as Lostariel said.
Thank you for your entry
I wish you the best of luck ^^
Claire x
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This is so deep and intense. I love it. Well done. Good luck in the contest sweetie
Much love
Ylova
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This is profound, in it's hollow ring, the sadness reverberates, concentric circles, out among those listening. This one hits home precisely.
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DEEPLY HEARTFELT!!!!
In these ten words you have managed to say so much, so sincere and filled with emotion.
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This made me cry as a parent I will never be able to understand how someone can hurt their on child it breaks my heart love you sweetie take care xoxox
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Just ten words but you managed to say soo much
Well done on this Steph
All the best to you in the contest
Ken
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Aww s you to death
I love you
Good luck in the contest
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in all honesty, i hope this was just a poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Looking over at my son, immersed in "Polar Express," I can't even imagine such.
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