Julius
You're one year old today
taking another step
in growing up.
Just like building blocks
you've grown much taller.
And like your little plastic boat
you have many waters yet to sail.
Remember the ball you toss around
you too have many directions
to travel in your life.
I pray you retain a part
of your precious innosense.
I mostly want you to always know
that I love you......
no matter what waters your sail
or directions you travel......
I'll always be proud of you my son!
Happy Birthday Julius!
Author notes
If you want you my use this in print!
A contest entry
- HAPPY 1ST BIRTHDAY JULIUS by onesugar.
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Comments
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Another beautiful entry, helping to celebrate a little mans first birthday. Thank you for this delightful read.
Good luck and thank you for entering.
~sugar~
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What a cute entry.
Thank you so much for participating in helping us celebrate
good luck.
-ephiphany
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This is so cute! I enjoyed reading it very much, and I love the metaphors in this.
Well penned,
~lost
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