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tell me.

your heart is a black hole
theirs no better way to explain
your whole goal in life
is to just cause others pain

i look into your eyes
and see nothing close to emotion
everything you do is planned
and every plan has a notion

so tell me you want me
tell me you need me
i dont give a damn anymore
you never believed in me

i guess that some people
some people are better left alone.




Author notes

“Some people are better, left alone” – 'You Don’t Need' – Rollins Band

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  • Glasyalabolas
    December 16, 2008

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    I like how this piece applies to the prompt, this truely does reflect someone that really is better left alone.

    Good write.