slammin together
needing another reprieve
you tried to leave me
in the land of make believe
aromatic orgasm
you leave me here in wonder
stickiest
of the icky
I love you
I
Love
You
and I know you love me too
you stay by me
my alibi
my little lie
I cherish you
rolled up tight, box sealed
after midnight, wounds now healed
A contest entry
- Sticky by Lj-.
700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the flow and the feelings I am left with after reading this poetry. It seems that this poem could be taken in several ways. My mind must be in the gutter right now because the sensuality way of taking things is what I come away with. I have a snide grin on my face. LOL The best to you in the contest.
Much Love ♥
Renee


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No bubble gum- not even a Snicker bar? You wrote this well, lady.





