Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

ickiest of the icky



slammin together
needing another reprieve
you tried to leave me
in the land of make believe

aromatic orgasm
you leave me here in wonder
stickiest
of the icky
I love you
I
  Love
      You

and I know you love me too


you stay by me
  my alibi
    my little lie

  I cherish you
    rolled up tight, box sealed
    after midnight, wounds now healed


A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • poetryality silver member
    December 8, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I love the flow and the feelings I am left with after reading this poetry. It seems that this poem could be taken in several ways. My mind must be in the gutter right now because the sensuality way of taking things is what I come away with. I have a snide grin on my face. LOL The best to you in the contest.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • thejollytinker
    December 6, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    No bubble gum- not even a Snicker bar? You wrote this well, lady.