mis-understanding,
disenchantment,
chaotic electricity singes me
steaming mediocricy
seeping from normalcy's pores
left runs right,
right runs west,
north bleeds into
tropical storm el nino
(you cannot escape me)
your desire permeates
my wet ground
leaving room
for tropical depressions
(impressions)
breathe in my fury
let it leave you wet for more,
wanting my chaos,
wreaking havoc,
release me slowly, watch me burn
Author notes
I want you to enter a poem on the theme of confusion. It can be any kind of confusion, i'll leave that up to you, but to make it more of a challenge you have a line limit of 20.
Wow me!
A contest entry
- Winner takes all!!!!! by Kitch.
415 points, ended December 14, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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well it certantly has wowed me! i love your use of words and the rhymes.
well done and good luck, i shud be finished judging befor too long i hope.
kitch x
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