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when prayers are not enough

 

 

 

Cholera murders

more than hope can save

as waves of misrule

leave watering holes dry

and Mugabe - the hero,

destroys as he dreams

 

of supremity's stride

above suppression's sores.

 

Starvation sings solace

to vacancy's pawns

while famine forms nooses

to hang weary bones

and his followers obey

his most drastic of ways

 

as violence beats blames

upon innocent breath.

 

Death looms too tall

each day and again

as hell's harmless hordes

perish in pain...

 

yet Mugabe is deaf

to the bell

as it tolls,

so he simply sits back--

 

watches his people crawl.

 

And here we all are,

as we sit

and we wait

to see too smug a smile

upon evil's lips

and we cry for injustice

at suffering's cost

 

and pray for the little ones

with lost lifetimes ahead.

 

We all feel regret

as the news channel ends

and humanity hides

behind page and screen

 

yet those people are still dying,

needing sight

before they fall,

as we carry on regardless

caring naught for them at all.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • The title of this piece rings with tones of so much truth. Another fantastic piece here.

    I think my absolute favorite part of this poem was the very first stanza.
    Cholera murders
    more than hope can save
    as waves of misrule
    leave watering holes dry
    and Mugabe - the hero,
    destroys as he dreams
    --What a stunning way to begin a poem. That's one of my favorite opening stanza's to anything that I've read in a long time.

    It's a pleasure to read work like this. Thank you so much for sharing this write.


  • ToxicSuicide
    February 21

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    I can imagine this happening, because it often does happen in society. Horrible things happen everyday but we're blind to it. I thank you so much for sharing your poem with me and for entering my contest, good luck to you.
    ~ToxicSuicide.


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    February 1

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    This is a lovely heartfelt piece Laura. There is so much hurt in this world and so many evil people such as Mugabe it is hard to accept that this happens day in and day out. That people are murdered and starved, caged like animals and denied any kind of autonomy or even any dreams for the future. While people elsewhere sleep with a belly full of refinements and all the gifts that freedom so readily offers. And yet they do not share, and do not care about all those dying elsewhere.Your voice is needed to sound the call, poetry that matters and maybe will change some hearts and some minds. Beautiful work, hugs, Bunny

  • Your depth of feeling and heart most definitely come through. This is a wake up call, a loud cry for compassion, for action, for change... and so bitter to fall upon deaf ears. Lots of nice consonance and near rhymes sprinkled throughout making this musical and flowing as well. Nicely done. Definitely poetry that matters.


  • crystaldust gold member
    January 17

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    As you say: prayers are useless for they have no effect. If a single off-the-planet brain can bring so many plagues to 'his' nation, including the paralysis of fear to his supporters' - where does the world go from here? You at least still persevere in making us aware of the hopelessness of it all. Thank you this poem.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    Meaningful, and Penned Indepth!

    You share here your heart that beats compassion, and no doubt you get sick and tired about watching lives die daily, and there's no-one who even gives them a chance. I admire my Dad in this manner, he taught me to care, and showed me why. He now helps homeless, and gives them clothes, feeds them, gives the shelter, and helps the find jobs. That's what I call giving hope, instead of lip-service. Bravo on this my friend.

    -Timothy

  • SoulWhispher
    December 7, 2008

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    THis is most definately a poem that matters, it pains such a picture that rips the soul and brings tears to the eyes, may we not forget, bless you for this most profound bit of poetry, John


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    Ahh now this is the La I know! And what truth you pen here. Mugabe flaunts his wrongdoings to the world, deafened to all opposition and blind to the genuine plight of his own people. Such a selfish arrogant SOB, his only thoughts being what he can accumulate for himself.
    Gaylene


  • poppa
    December 6, 2008

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    Wonderful truth in this... He is a most evil man, yet the world has a history of sitting back and watching madman after madman destroy unabated... sad sad indictment on humanity...

    excellent write

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