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Obsession

Crazy thoughts of the obession.
Crucial facts forgotten.
Tongue,
    the largest part of your body.
Seeing, Feeling, Seeking
  the fictional character in your mind.
But he's not fictional anymore
as the face becomes the picture.
His movements become the motion,
the smile you are finally able to see.

He is now the love
the one you dream about from reading.
The one you talk about with friends,
  that guy on the screen.

Your mind forgets
  that this person is a human.
  that this man is a person.
Your brain sees
    the being as a character
    the fiction as reality.
Your tongue stops
    but your screams are endless
    louder than they ever were.
You jump,
  even though you don't know him
on his lap.
    if he ever gets near you.

Obsession of a character
is the worst kind there is.

Author notes

I never know if it's good...ever. Sometimes I re-read my works and I'm like YES I did AWESOME. But not at first...not at first. It's always random. I've been having dreams as stories, like looking like they could be in a movie or book...I think that's my mind telling meI should start writing again. I'm going to try and write actual stories. I don't know where that will get me.

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