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People Always Told Me There Was Something Funny About You

Decoding your mixed messages
Are proving to be
As difficult as me
Attempting to figure out
Your tactics.

I've never been so
Utterly confused
In all of my
Already confusing life.

You tell me that
It's not your fault
That your mind is
Scattered
And that
Your heart
Is inside out

All I know
Is that I love you
And deep down
You know you feel it, too.

Author notes

6. "My heart is inside-out," he said.

Ha ha I kind of did this at like, 12 o' clock, so sorry if it sucks !!!

Regarding the title- sorry... xD

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  • SomeGirlYouKnew
    December 6, 2008

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    there are a few small grammatical errors.
    but mostly well done. and thanks for entering my contest.
    good luck ^_^