Faces so many faces jutting out as she ran
Tons of hands with groping fingers caressing
Running, panting, trying to escape the unseen
The walls of the thorny maze catching her skin
Like a fly caught in a vast and intricate spider’s web
Icy white clouds issued from her mouth with each exhale
Blood bubbled from the cuts that marred her pale skin
Her heart hammered against her ribcage desperately in vain of calming it’s self
The shadows ate at her surroundings creeping closer to her frail and broken frame
Bewildered scattered thoughts and run on sentences filled her mind in twisters of endless fog
Salty pathways of forgotten tear stains were apparent on her ghost like face
Eyes wide with indescribable terror and despair
Ripping at the thorns that held her captive she ignored the biting pricks that invaded her senses
All that mattered was survival
Gasping, grasping for the air that never filled her deprived lungs quick enough
Clawing at her throat desperately wishing for the oxygen her body desired to somehow come forth gushing like a geyser
Spiraling deeper and deeper into herself, her consciousness collapses like dominos thrown in motion one by one falling in swirling pattern that was her mind
Lips blue, eyes clenched shut her chest stilled
Her body encased in the shadows as they devoured her whole
Biting, tarring her very soul until she was no more
This is what hell is like
What fear idolized it’s goals as, it gave life to monstrous shadows
Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Sloth, Wrath, Envy, and Pride
We never stood a chance
Author notes
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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‘This is what hell is like’ ...
The ‘she’ in this poem seems to be depicting the entire human race ... there are many of us that feel what is described within this piece ... I normally don’t fully like free verse, but you entwine the words used and the images into a great piece indeed! ... wonderful job.
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there was lots of description in this poem. it was described in a scary way, that i believe (i hope) it was meant to. good job. keep working -
your discription and similies are wonderfull very well written i love the last two lines


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... damn.
This is amazing!
The picture it paints, it is like a movie coming to life... wow.
Such imagination.



