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The Eyes are the Widows to the Soul !

  The Eyes Are the Widows to the Soul


W. Peter Sanci Dec. 6 / 2008

Well my dear, dear friend’s I’m back once more.
To tell you something that I feel is important, so I certainly hope you don’t snore.
When you look at someone for the very first time, what do you look at first.
That’s right my dear friend, the person’s eyes, their opening to their
soul’s, just as if it were rehearsed.
To look too long into another’s eyes is to invite certain disaster.
You might even have to go to confession and to see you’re pastor.
One thing I know for sure is that the eyes never lie.
When you look at some one new and those feelings in you start to stir.
You’re eyes will give you away every time, you know immediately, what’s in you’re heart, no need to confer.
So be advised my dear, dear friends, that when it comes to affairs of the heart, you’re eyes will always betray you.
So now you are forewarned, you just need to be careful, so you won’t end up being blue.

Author notes

This is for Optin # 1 ! I havve always wanted to write this poem ! I hope you all enjoy it !

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  • Bailey Girl
    December 6, 2008
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    It's really cute, and just shy of what I didn't want. Very good write.

  • Pietro456
    December 6, 2008
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    Great !