I know what's coming as I look up into your eyes
I shiver as I feel your hand moving slowly up my thigh
I take a deep breath and try to keep my thoughts under control
knowing that i'm willingly giving you a part of my soul
pain shoots throughout my body as you push yourself in
i kiss you with passion, thinking this is the sweetest sin
every emotion flies though me at one hundred miles a minute
I let them out with a moan, these are things I can't inhibit
You whisper in my ear and you look into my eyes
And in that moment I know I am yours and you are mine
"I love you!" screams my mind but I keep my mouth mute
I can't let you know yet, this moment is too absolute
We lay next to each other and you wrap your arms around me
You softly kiss my forehead and ask me what I'm thinking
I think carefully about how to put into words what I'm feeling
I look right into your eyes and whisper "everything"
Author notes
I think the title and the content of the poem is pretty self-explainitory
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This is a beautiful, sensual experience for the reader. Such a terrific write. You explain so amazingly the feeling of the first time. Great write!
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thank you!
i appreciate the feedback
peace, love, & cheese
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beautifully penned
such a well expressed poem about a very intimate moment -
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thank you
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WoW Child!!
That was beautiful...I hope you feel the same way... -
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thank you! and I'm not entirely sure what you mean by feeling the same way...
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awesome poem!
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thanks
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This is really a good poem. I loved it.
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thank you!
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This is great and such a great story
that you have written here. I really
enjoyed reading it. Keep up the wonderful
work here and thanks for sharing it!
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thank you!
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so sweet and yet...
hotter than a two dollar pistol
lol
no seriously tho this is a great write i like it and it reads easy and youre right about it being self explanitory LOL
~teddybare~
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thank you!
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"sweet sin" is a sweet expression. "everything" is very meaningful. its a wonderful write
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thank you!
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loved this... very nicely written and flows very well ... very descripative ...
i enjoyed reading
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thank you
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A wonderful write here and I enjoyed reading this! Keep penning hon
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thank you
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