I look up into drops of rain
Gazing from a wide open space.
I feel the drops upon my face.
This is the release from inner pain
The soft balm needed deep within
soothingly permeating skin.
I am rescued from depths insane
as I look deep into the sky
and can accept the reasons why.
In a list
A contest entry
- Write a Poem to Me by Girl-Interrupted.
500 points, ended December 8, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh Yes!
Dear brother...I love the rain...and I wrote Saturate this past summer one morning because as you so deeply and fluently expressed in such a short message confirms what we know, a cleansing, a restoring, a healing...bless you.
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there is nothing like the rain, that is what i have come to believe in life, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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oh wow! this is truely awesome! The comparison of the rain and relief from lifes demons is original, and creative! The last line actually brought a smile to my face. Thanks you so much for entering!
becca
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