Hands brushed
soft caress
lips touched
bated breath
clothes fell
skin blushed
eyes met
tender look
pulling closer
bodies entwined
dancing began
rhythmic rhyme
woven together
intimate web
fingers traced
silky flesh
backs arched
pulses rushed
bodies merged
hips thrust
harder faster
frenzied kiss
silk ties
held wrists
tongue traced
pinnacled breasts
sucking eagerly
legs spread
wide wanton
cunt wet
nails clawed
marking flesh
pleasured moans
panting breath
large cock
throbbing erect
breathing rapid
glistening flesh
gyrating twisting
grinding relentless
deep penetration
torso's contort
senses heightened
crescendo sort
orgasmic screams
pierced air
spiralling writhing
essence shared
slowly caressing
tender kiss
lying together
sated bliss
Author notes
BG Thanks to my AP sis the sensual Piffers
Onesugar #1
A contest entry
- !!!!*Making Love Intensely*!!!! by ForeverLastingComa.
490 points, ended February 22, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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10 out of 10!!!
wow this is amazing, you are an amazing author,
completely sexy, and beautifully written.
i dont have a favorite or least favorite part, because i loved it in its entireity.
^__^
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Glad you enjoyed. Thank you for your lovely comment
Valued & appreciated
~sugar~
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Wow blew me off my dancing feet with this great making love poem
Sexy, loving, passionate, ... you are a masteress of this craft of writing
Great rhyme too
Good luck to you hun
Julie x
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Thanks hon, I have my moments
A pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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first I want to say that I absolutely LOVE ur bg
the poem is wonderful as well sis, just stopping by to show my support and good luck in the contest.
Lubbs u
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Brill BG sis cheers
Always a pleasure to have you stop by and read
Lubb u ~sugar~
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Love the form!
Good erotica in your two word lines. Hot free verse to keep me warm on a winter's day. Good luck in your contest!
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I was just playing with words and like how it went
Glad you enjoyed and it warmed you up
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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its all sexual bliss, its full of physical enjoyment. the poem is interesting and enticing till the last line
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Thank you for reading and commenting
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Damn! sug what the hell you on? Viagra lmao
Wicked write hon. Hot and sensual
Good luck in the contest
All the best
Emma
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LMAO! just a little tease..glad you enjoyed hon
Value and appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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Very powerful words you got there. Very sizzling, especially with that background! I liked it very much. My favorite lines were,
"slowing caressing
tender kiss
lying together
sated bliss"
Thank You for entering and good luck -
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A pleasure, appreciate and value your comment.
~sugar~
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large cock! YUMMY!
It looks like you've been thinking about a naughty boy like me again, Baby! HE! HE! A fast paced and sweet and sensual NAUGHTY rhyme gets to me every single time, Sweetie. As I'm off to eat me supper now - I think that I just may cum back to this one for my desert - a nice, wet and juicy cunt - before heading off to dreamland! GOOD LUCK in the contest with this VERY JUICY PIECE - in more ways than one.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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LOL!!! It's been a while since i've done one of these
Always a pleasure to have you read and receive your wicked comments...glad you enjoyed hon Enjoy your dessert sweetie
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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I love this from you hon! The background is sizzlin to Good luck in the contest
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Thank you hon, appreciate you reading.
The BG credit to my sweet AP sis Piffers
~sugar~
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