It had been a normal caving trip an hour ago,
and now the light embraces me
where no light should be
and now the light becomes a person.
An angel,
as she materializes
around my body,
I have no choice
but to
embrace her back.
And she tells me
to take
her hand and I do.
The Paradise
of Heaven
Unfolds.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt, Big Points! by Nicada.
1800 points, ended December 10, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Angel poems are my specialty.
Comments
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This was so sweet.
Beautiful thoughts penned brilliantly. Good luck in the contest.
Love
Alyzeh
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This is so beautiful and a lovely thought
for this prompt. What a wonderful feeling
to know that an angel is at your side. Well
done and good luck to you here!
Jeremy0826 -
This is just beautiful, and you saw something in the picture that I had not. Very nice job relating to the picture prompt. Thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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Awww,shucks
Thank yooooooooooooooooouuuuu.
*melts into puddle*
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awesome
A.,..... i think this is ur best poem sooo far!!!!
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