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Rejuvenate


Sleep, poet, sleep
your words come to an end
for all the lines composed before
you never could transcend

Sleep, poet, sleep
mourn not the dying flame
nor the waning ancient light
that covered your mortal shame

Sleep, poet, sleep
for lest you share the sins
of frigid words written since
you caught the fiercest winds

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  • pixiestix gold member
    November 3

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    So essentially poets would be better off dead which I gather you mean in the metaphorical sense, meaning to put down your pen. Your title seems to indicate that by doing so the poet will regain a sense of who they were before they essentially sold out.

    I think it's ironic too that you wrote this with quite a poetic flare.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 3

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    Oh, to think that one could never transcend
    or be the shining light again might cause
    a sleeplessness, rather than calm sleep,
    one would think. Ah, to read again when
    the poet's heart is warmed, words on fire!

    Hmmmm.... perhaps an electric blanket?

    The title gives hope to the reader
    that once more the poet's words
    would surpass the past!


    M-C