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Raging Heat of Passion

as we lay in our bed of inferno lust
You Lick the scripture of passion unto my skin
while you wrap your tongue around
my nipples making them perk

giving my walls that heated friction
Feeding the fire between my legs
stirring my flaming embers
with your hard poker

singeing the sheets under me
setting off my fire alarm
then making my juices flow
to extinguish this raking fire

I don't want to drip dry
take your warm stiff tongue
spread my swollen lips apart
And suck my valley dry

So moist and delicious are
your sugary walls of heaven
spread your wings my angelic lady
of infinite passion
as I wallow in the decadance
of your rapturous paradise

Rain drops of ambrosial delight
upon my wading tongue
Let the fires of Jupiter seize
my eternal soul
for I am madness drifting in
obscurity
on a journey into infinite desires
lush and plentious with every
lick of your candyland of wonders

I feel thunder in my loins rampant
as lightning bolts that illuminate
the clouds of your fermenting skies

Cry out to me, words of mourning
into sweet ecstasy and release
all your enchantments upon my
lightning rod of potency
and let your succulent walls of
erotic favor crush the violent terrors
within me

I hear our bedroom roar
hail from our passion
falls down hard onto us
making this hurricane rip
through our bodies colliding

Our bed, our castle rumbles
I grab the sheets tight
as the typhoon hits
my wet heated body
trying to catch that one deep breath

Feeling the last hard strokes
going deep within my pussy
my body sayin " ah yes!"
stroking me passionately and eagerly
errupting my fiery volcano
 

Author notes

This is a collaborative piece written by hotchocolate
and myself. She's one sizzlin moma that I'd love
to cook with. Hope you enjoy.

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Comments

  • The D O M
    December 22, 2008

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    Yes this is definitely a sizzling piece!!!

    Great stuff the pair of you, you should be ashamed, or proud

    The D O M


  • ennovy silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    Sultry Hot Erotica

    This just a burning hot scene...that one has to beware of the blaze on the page....Both your words are smoking...be still my heart! I Enjoyed this read it's purely erotic......excellent writing..novy


  • LovetimesLove
    December 6, 2008

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    It's about to Erupt

    All burners are on and turned on "HIGH." High voltage in your collaboration. Hotchocolate indeed.


  • Blueskywonder
    December 6, 2008

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    Phew... sizzlin is an understatement! This is smokin'and very intense and erotic painting a vivid picture of heated union. Descriptive with great imagery and nice use of poetic devices