The last time I talked to you, you were lonely and out of place
[I fall asleep by the telephone, I see the clock and I'm waiting up alone]
If we cut out the bad, well then we'd have nothing left
How does it feel, to treat me like you do?
Can you feel that?
[Prison gates won't open up for me, on these hands and knees I'm crawling]
So what's the craziest thing YOU'VE done lately?
Sometimes I feel I've got to run away, I've got to get away
Now, you tell me you like, you tell me want it
[I don't believe I fell asleep, talk's a waste of time]
She's got a smile that it seems to me, Reminds me of childhood memories
She's staring at me, I'm sitting wondering what she's thinking
[Never, Never, Never say never]
The best thing about tonight's that we're not fighting
Children grow and women producing, Men go working, Some go stealing
Well I've been looking real hard, and I'm trying to find a job
When you walk away, you don't hear me say, please, oh baby don't go
[Stupid girls, Stupid girls]
You know I can't believe you
Pretty girl is suffering while he confesses everything
Author notes
1. Somewhere out there - Our Lady Peace
2. Your love is a lie - Simple Plan
3. Cut up Angels- the Used
4. Blue Monday- Orgy
5. Down with the sickness- Disturbed
6. Saving Me- Nickleback
7. Crazy Angel- Kill Hannah
8. Tainted Love - Marilyn Manson
9. Liberate- Disturbed
10. Daddy's Little Defect- Sugarcult
11. Sweet Child of Mine - Guns N roses
12. Mad- Ne-Yo
13. Never Say Never - Styx
14. Fall For You- Secondhand Serenade
15. Jenny from the Block- Jennifer Lopez
16. Keep on Rockin' me baby- Steve Miller Band
17. Simple and Clean- Utada Hikaru
18. Stupid girls- Pink
19. Cry For You- Korn
20. Pretty Girl (The Way)- Sugarcult
21. Bleed Well- HIM
A contest entry
- Ipod Playlist Poetry! by Salt Therapy.
400 points, ended December 26, 2008, 42 entries
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Comments
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HAHAHAHA! As soon as I saw, "Can you feel that", I KNEW that you had Disturbed in your list... That song is my current favourite
EPIC win!
Bravo & good luck!
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