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Fly Away


(chorus)
When you're an angel
with a broken wing
fighting for all of your dreams
just close your eyes and hold out your hands
then you, will fly away

(v1)
I've gotta get out
out of this town
far away from the strings tying me down
I need to break free from
all of this pain, but it isn't easy...

(repeat chorus)

(v2) I'm on my own now
facing my fears
it hasn't been easy though
there've been some tears
but I broke free from
the pain of this place but it wasn't easy...

(repeat chorus with starting because)

(tag) Just close your eyes
and hold out your hands
open your eyes and watch me fly, fly away

A contest entry

Option #1-My own lyrics

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Comments


  • albinoblacksheep720
    December 7, 2008

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    Wow nice

    I like it. It kinds makes me laugh. Because it reminds me of Fly Like an Eagle. I like the flow. Nice job Good luck


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    well songwriter,

    very impressive

    very good I love it, I read it again, well I sang it

    now this is soo a gold

    you have talent young lady

    God bless you my friend...


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    wow, this is stunning, i bet it would be amazing to hear it subg, its an outstanding piece, thanks for sharing