Close them hazel windows, let
expectations take control
fingertips traveling slowly
o'er places dreamt, bold ♥
Long hard firmness
above this field of seeds
anticipated directions, desires
kneeling on my knees ♥
Cuddling tenderly twin orbs
perfectly suspended
between strong rippling thighs ♥
Muscles mocking ecstasy
DAMN! rocking m' behind
we lost track of time ♥
Cum with me, n' ver let me go
orgasmic muttering whispered
as I moaned clearly; Don't stop!
Each stroke screams one more
swivel, one dip deeper;
this rapid dance of passionate
lovers was born honey-sweet ♥
from his wet French kiss ♥
Author notes
sort of a sexual rant of thankful-ness
In a list
A contest entry
- Erotic Innuendos. by Poetryintheblood.
900 points, ended September 20, 2009, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your most beautiful and sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thank you!
Let me say the couple in the pic are hot!! I love them! Anyway this was very arousing and teasing. I love the way you used the heart as punctuation very unique in my book. I loved this very soft and sensual yet sexy. Good luck
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Beautifully sensuous piece, delicious all round
The D O M
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Good golly..
whew! wow awesomely sensual!! very vivid imagery, and just plain HOTT!!
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WOw!!! bold and sensual. Love the aggressiveness and yet still playful and mature. Well done mommie. Need to get back to how I do things as well.
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AN EXQUISITE PIECE
This is an exquisite piece of erotica that is unique in content and imagery came up excellently to exemplify the outcome of the scenery painted by in a very picturesque manner" Novy."I admire the glowing reflection of romance/passion that reverberates through the poem.
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Oh mama...I Love this!
good luck, this was outstanding.
Love he French Decor
-Ladye
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Quite a bold write, but then there is joy if one feels free to say whatever they want.
Congrats with my eyes closed.
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yes i think so ahem blush.. you pulled it off again, god what do you dream of ,lol
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oooo hot and wet
me likes
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Neat and nifty stuff here, and certainly goes well with photo....
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Novy
I like it all and if I said more
I would have to poke my own eyes out... lol
Very good, Rick
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Nice job. I enjoyed it alot.
Mike
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Exquisite
Yes baby! this is an eloquent piece
of romantic interludes wrapped
in passionate clovers of love.
The visuals are awesome. Love
is a many splendered things.
Great work sugar
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Ummm, that is so climactic! In more ways than one.
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Most appealing...
as I climb down from the ceiling
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