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The inevitable Question

We usually tend to choose
The directions in
Which our lives will take,
& accept the defaults
Thrust that hit upon us
Thus, becoming victims
of circumstances. But
sometimes when we
Do so decide, we certainly face
The inevitable question of How?

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  • Soft-Rain
    December 8, 2008

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    Great Poem

    Yes, this is a place i have been ...the How is the worst part or maybe it's the Why?

    Hugs
    ~Lisa~

    Ps: Watch your caps and where your periods should go. K?


    • theburninglegend silver member
      December 8, 2008
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      yeah, About that

      I tried to correct the cap but for some reasons I resent it as it was like when I submitted it. Anyways, how is the evening or the afternoon rolling in? write back