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Precious Kim

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Precious child, torn asunder please

remember you’re dearly

loved.

 

~*~

The crimes against you will not

go unpunished for I see

the whole worlds every

blemish.

 

~*~

Please remember that I am

beside you, that you are

my complete

desire.

 

~*~

Even before your ancestor were

born, I knew of you.

I loved you

then.

 

~*~ 

I have come to uplift the brokenhearted

and set the captives free

You are precious

To me.

 

 

~*~

So let me heal

 

 

~*~

My sister my heart goes out to your very pain,

I am here if you ever need a friend

your trials are hard and

you can’t do it

alone.

 

 

~*~

I pray the Lord cover your heart and soul and

 binds your pain and sends it back

to hell were it came

from

 

 

~*~

Please know you are loved and you were

not left on the side of the road

or cast away

 

~*~

Kim my precious friend I am here to stay

 

Love and Blessings

 

 

~Rend

 

 

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  • Nom de Plume
    February 8

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    beautiful dedication for a friend, shows the depth of love in that heart of yours Rend, congrats on the shiny


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      February 16
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      Thank you Rob,

      I am sorry i am so late to respond,
      you have been busy my friend,

      thank you for commenting

      Blessings

      Rend


  • rite
    December 8, 2008

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    Your words in this poem show that your heart is overflowing with love - the very power that spawned life. A fragile inkling of which will conquer the avalanche of hate now tormenting this world in an infinite number of ways. The ability to love is our greatest talent and gift, our most underrated property. Our source and destination. Thank you for showing there is still love around in this heartless plane. The comments you received to this poem express that you do not just write about it. Respect.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    This is so lovely, Rend. I haven't known you long, but you've been a great comforter, which I truly appreciate. You're so special to me. Thanks for putting so much thought into this beautiful piece and entering my contest!


  • quack silver member
    December 7, 2008
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    i love this sis and i love you huggggggggggs you tight


  • alivefromlove
    December 6, 2008

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    this is such a touching, beautiful poem for your friend rend =)

    awesome poem, and good luck in the contest!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    A precious inspirational write of sentiment, spiritual words from the precious book of our faith...Reaching a hand as a sister and friend to the one for whom you dedicate the poem...The strength of your words in undeniably amazing....Powerful write!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 6, 2008

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    simply put this was wonderful, touching and golden, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, golden poem.

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