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The Rose of Love

With eyes that shimmer moonlight's dawn,
reflect desire with senses torn,
at love's caress from head to toe,
my rose, she blooms in passions glow.

In gentle touch of moistened dew,
on lips of candied carmine hue,
entice my desire to meet her flow,
my rose, she blooms in passions glow.

Her hunger driven lust I crave,
as fingers surf  her sultry wave,
open flower I softly blow,
my rose, she blooms in passions glow.

In heartbeats of intimate bliss,
the soothing lips tenderly kiss,
embrace time only love can know,
my rose, she blooms in passions glow.

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The rose being an angel

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  • The D O M
    December 19, 2008

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    This is a delicious sensual love poem, the rhyme and flow are very good and the passion well portrayed!


  • softest-whispers
    December 15, 2008

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    This made me smile very much, You must love Your angel a lot, I hope when I find my One He will be all to me as well

    ~Luce


    • Corvus Corone
      December 15, 2008
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      Thank you

      Your One will be everything and more, Luce, or He won't qualify to be the One. Meanwhile enjoy the journey.

      Jem


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Good gosh..

    so so sensual, stimulating the mind with images of 'happy '

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