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Winter Tragedy

During winter,
warmth is a treasure-
a gift for all.


Some must pray for it,
others find it close.


sadly some don't...


In that time of shivering,
they forget what matters most..
never again will they see,
flowers blooming-
or hear children laugh..


Seasons will come and go,
but to them winter will live on-

forever inflicted with sorrows

Author notes

I picked this quote -
"The tragedy of life is what dies in the hearts and souls of people while they live."
-Albert Einstein

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  • Kiddy
    December 12, 2008
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    A real good one...


  • chilali
    December 11, 2008

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    Wow. This is amazing. Such beautiful imagery. This poem was very well worded. I love it. A superb write! Good luck to you in the contest and keep it flowing

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    December 9, 2008

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    sad the plight of homeless tis the season to be grateful for the good things we have....
    Cyber Artist


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Good write.

    Full of sadness.


  • Candy6
    December 6, 2008

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    Great write

    My favorite lines:

    Seasons will come and go,
    but to them winter will live on-

    forever inflicted with sorrows

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