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Falling Stars Don't Fall

I look into the night sky
And I wonder why
Do stars fall.
The queston is "Do they fall at all"?
Just when their life is over,
They die in a fiery supernova.
As they exhale their last breath
They jump to their death.
Every night, I have cried
For the stars that commited suicide.

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  • samantha jean
    December 10, 2008

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    I do like this write, but I'm not so sure of it's relevance to my contest.
    Good write, thanks for entering.


  • Glenn
    December 6, 2008

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    wow


    this is a good poem and well writen
    i must say that this poem comes out by the experience
    well done

    ,&
    Glenn