More than once I have wanted to wrap you in me
as you would come to me in that slinky night dress
never ashamed of your soon to be nakedness.
More than once I have wanted to wrap you in me
and slowly build up to a high culmination,
steeping your body in deepest satiation.
All the twinkling stars would blush from our strip tease
while we would sing with our bodies time after time.
Bodies of lissome grace and innate expertise.
We would share our ecstasy in passion sublime.
I have the tool and you are blessed with the socket
with deepest concupiscence to fuel our rocket.
As I lie here soaking your body into mine
tracing your skin with pleasure, my deepest repine.
Author notes
This is a sonnet form I am playnig with it start with two tercets Abb Abb The A line is also a refrain to be repeated in the second stanza. The next stanza is a quatrain and simply goes cdcd followed by two coulpets ee ff 14 lines. Line length can vary but must be equal in count.
In a list
A contest entry
- Personally sensual (or erotic) by The D O M.
1000 points, ended December 22, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The form is certainly interesting, the flow and the rhyme are very good, not sure about the closing couplet, the poem does not seem to build up to a discontentment unless there is a meaning of repine of which I am unaware.
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ummm
yes I recognize that feeling very well
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i love that , i love it , i mean that with every sense of the word, on of my favorites from you to date, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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hehe...
You devil you
I'm telling your mother.
Love,
Amera♥
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