Living in a bubble,
light and airy,
where fairytale lies
suffice ...
Where men are
all angels and whores
are a thing of the past.
The last thing
you want to hear is:
Your little world
has been popped
by a bastard man
brandishing a pin;
sin my dear,
is everywhere.
A contest entry
- Lie To Me by vampedvixen.
550 points, ended January 14, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Amazing
I love it! The rhythm flow and word use, amazing. Fantastic write. Yours,
Gypsy
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thank you my friend
Take care
John
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Wow!!! I love your flow and how you ended this poem. Like a blast!!
Wishing you the best in the contest and I shall bookmark this if you don't mind. It was a very enjoyable read.
Best wishes
~Noor
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not a prob, thanks and take care
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