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That Became Their Destiny




Lost love, flowing with the wind
Only wish is to find tomorrow’s hope
Her lips departs as she cast her wishes
Carelessly she dreams, and only to find
Her hopes scattered through her fingertips
Pieces of their lives carelessly
Blown with the wind
It is unfortunate that loving
Each other became a sin
Flipping through pages, only to
Find journals of their dreams
That caused agonies and pain
That became their destiny

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