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I Choose Cremation

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Depth, like felt in plunge
rocky relief to tickle water

trickle beseep in mossy mouth
of earth reclaiming her stake

albeit sandy and hard to root-grip


Width, like breach of branch
on skin to tender for such treachery

welting like shame and sorrow
that stretches fifty years
down a zigzag mixture
of knowing
but making the same mistakes

Height, like touch of eye to distant star,
so imperceptible a length
that it burrows down
through rod and neuron, into bone
and sinewy supplication makes it seem
as if I owned
that part of brilliance.

Six-by-six:  they said,
for they were afraid
of not being held

so sad

for they could have been all of all.




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I do choose cremation...

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  • tomisb silver member
    December 7, 2008

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    What we hold is everything but what bears the journey in the course of events is worn and empty at the time of parting. Is it better to make a religion of the shell o'er what the shell contained or should we accept the cycle and let ourselves join in the turning of the soil. I for one would choose the later and let my memory be all that is held while my shell's dust becomes the minerals in the root.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Cannonsfire
    December 6, 2008

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    I want to be scattered to the four winds, I never did hold much for small cramped spaces, I like to seek freedom whether now or in eternity C