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[ Breakable. ]

Breakable.

That's what I am.

Everything destorying me so slow.

So I'll go, my friends.
I'll never return to this place.
You died, you left me alone
You said you'd live only to see me face to face.

So I look to the sky
And cry freely into the night.
For I will never forget
My darlings Peace, Salem and Light.

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  • xxvampyregirlxx
    October 15, 2009
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    none of us will ever forget them jenna and they are very close to us. in our hearts. they were so amazing..


  • Sir Squigglim
    December 7, 2008
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    Jenna... i'm so sorry...

  • Didnt It Rain
    December 6, 2008

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    Angel, I'm so, so sorry. I've never wanted to be with you so much before. I know comments like these are sort of empty, but it sounded to me like they led pretty good lives with the consolation of knowing that you were their friend and you loved them so much as they loved you.
    I'm also pretty sorry that my word choice is so bad. It's the morning and I'm a little off. But still, I don't think they really left you alone. Just feel better, okay? Because Jennas aren't supposed to be sad, it's just against the laws of everything. D: I'm home all day today, so feel free to call me if you need anything at all. I love you.

    Anyways, great poem. The first three lines really stick out. The layout in general is just fantastic.