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Butterfly kisses -- x

Butterfly kisses flow
freely in the air;
black and white they reach
our cheeks.



We're wrapped up in a rainbow
of colours and tied together with
the string of a kite,
flying high into the clouds;
the sparkling diamond in the sun.



We compare ourselves to
dragonflies;
Not as pretty as the butterfly
but much more the curious.




We're not perfect by any means,
but it always ends up fine
and we can sit in our green leaf tree;
waiting for our butterfly kisses to
reach our cheeks.

Author notes

Why don't you
-- Get a clue -- ?


Hope you didn't mind I changed dragonfly to a plural...

dragonfly -- http://lightandshadow.deviantart.com/art/dragon-fly-63642568
Tree -- http://p0rg.deviantart.com/art/This-Chosen-Tree-64313089
Kite -- http://animal-e.deviantart.com/art/A-Kite-97546157
Clouds -- http://p0rg.deviantart.com/art/please-don-t-fall-cloud-82369686
Kisses -- http://jayxxbe.deviantart.com/art/Sweet-kisses-bw-86929318

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Comments


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    You get GOLD really great

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    I love this you did a great job with it and I don't mind that you changed it to plural good luck in my contest thanks for following the rules and I love the background butterflies are amazing

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Your Clues for this contest are :
    Dragon Fly
    Tree
    Kite
    Clouds
    Kisses
    Good luck with finding your clues have fun and be well.