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Thank You

You opened me up to
the beauty of life:

The delicate petals
on flowers,
hours spend
in loving arms;
the beautiful hues
of the sky.

With one kiss,
just one kiss,
you made me shiver.
Made me deliver
all my love to you.

Wrapped in heart-strings,
and a label boasting
blissful commitment,
to you,
and only you

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