Cause me some rippling pain
and I'll give you some in return.
Every slice and crippling strain,
makes me plea and yearn,
for it to hurt again and again.
Baby, hurt me again please;
this body can easily heal.
Are you too afraid to appease,
this humble little appeal?
Grab the key to my heart
and stab it into my chest.
Make this night start
in ways that are best.
Cut me from head to waist
so deep that I may quit life.
Kill me so that death's taste,
might remain on your knife.
Let me embrace the torment;
let me embrace a new affair.
You can't make me content,
With this life I seem to bare.
Death is my only desire.
I long to join the dead;
All I really want to acquire
is a bullet in my head.
Author notes
I'm not really into kinky pain, I just enjoy it as a wake up call so don't think I'm weird. I was listening to some song (can't remember what song though 
) where this guy is in love with the suggestion of dieing so I was inspired.
I hope you enjoy the random kinky pain rhyme!
A contest entry
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wow
its different, I love it!
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Amazing.
This is amazing!
The flow is perfect.
Love it!
=D
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Powerful
This poem
has such pain
love and hate
all the things
that keep a
lovesick
awake
Great job
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oh!! this was a bit interesting.. there are some people that enjoy pain with their pleasure... and thats what I got from this.. and yet there is an interesting twist in the middle of it and the ending brings about a whole new meaning to the poem.. You really did a good job... thanks much for sharing!
Angel
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I feel good when you feel the need to hurt me, it reminds me of how much you care, so to me it's the same sort of thing, a wake up.
"Kill me so that death's taste,
might remain on your knife."
I liked these lines the best, not sure, but it has something to do with 'death's taste' ><
I agree with Sam =D I can hear In Flames doing a song like this.
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:/ whoa. scary >.<. i really liked it though, such rhythm to it, it would make a great song...because it sounded like a song...yay. I liked every verse, particually
Grab the key to my heart
and stab it into my chest.
Make this night start
in way that is best.
Yay. so literal. and the last line rhymed so well, but it wasnt forced!
-Swintha
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