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The Divine Aurora




In further evidence to overcome aurora's trance,
lively moments' decorations at a place of justice,
happiness and sadness at once in sincere simplicity;
to let appreciation in calmness to recover an energy.

Listened intention saved in hearts with praying hymns,
called for a mood of speedy recovery and consolation,
ornamented with a grin on faces smiling, a beginning,
for healing soul's sane wounds with love and wisdom.

Love is the force to move eternal heart with a reason,
hopes with the blessings of God to cure confrontation,
get you out of this evil with a trance to lead the life,
because I know that in your existence, there is a hope.

The dreams sleep in your soul in hopes of an awakening
to bestow happiness in state of worship to define a trust,
to cure, to be sane, except for your interior malices,
with a miraculous belief in name of the lord of hosts.








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  • aeolia
    July 15
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    yes

    i agree entirely with adrieline.

  • Yes. There's such beauty in your words.


  • adsaige
    June 22

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    Yes.

    The message is thought-provoking although I believe the overall flow, word play, and imagery could be worked on.