He presented a naked heart
In front of her.
Dressed up in no more than
The pants of his desires.
Offering her to touch what soon
Will warm her skin,
And freeze her thoughts.
Now she’s drowned in him
So all she can see is the ‘T’ without
The ‘ruth’.
Author notes
Contest prompt:
50 words on: An inconvenient truth
Thanks for reading!
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A contest entry
- Quickie - 50 words 10 poets reserve by Cannonsfire.
1000 points, ended December 6, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrites short by Melissa Gayle.
600 points, ended December 10, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Really like 'pants of his desires'.
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Great take on the prompt. I cannot believe I did not read this before and I wrote for this contest too. Congratulations on the bronze love.
Much love
Ylova
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this is really good.
its just a little short and it needs a little more explanation.
i really enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing.
your Faerie
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Clever take on the prompt, thank you for the entry
C
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very well written.
simply magnifique.
well done and best of luck
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SUCH DEEP HEARTACHE!!!!!
's and big 
's To help ease this pain 's
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