I share my heart with you my friend
I share with you my all
And all I have is yours my friend
My friend is yours my all
If life should let you down my friend
Just up and give a call
And I shall hear your plea my friend
I’ll not desert at all
And if the time must come my friend
That you should have to part
I’ll not stand in your way my friend
I’ll have you in my heart
In a list
A contest entry
- Write a Poem to Me by Girl-Interrupted.
500 points, ended December 8, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you see in this piece?
Comments
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats so sad and sweet and man i love your picture
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Again, thank you. You certainly have been busy today, haven't you.
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Mate...you have done a super write here...I find it so comforting as I miss B.g. The faithfulness of a friend is so indellibly said here, in a lovely rhyme..and the pic does the icing on the cake..Delightfully precious!
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Thanks, mate. Yeah. I only knew BG a short time on here and i found her to be a wonderful person. So much sickness but still ready to laugh. Did you go to her funeral? Thank you for the comments. Much appreciated.
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I love it
Absolutely enamored. The picture added to it of course (being a girl, I had to "AW"). I feel that the play of words was fantastic; you kept me wanting more, and I think that every friend should have a poem like this written like this for them. Even though it appears cute, deeper lies the true message of friendship, the long-lasting kind. Excellent job!!
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Thank you so much for your comments. Indeed, my words are not written lightly. I believe friendship is something that should be honored completely. If you cannot stand by someone, then you cannot be a true friend. I may not know this person by sight, but here, i honor them. Thanks again.
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You are very welcome! After all, you gave me a comment on my first poem on here. It's the least I could do. Slowly I'm growing more confident in them. Only 2 on here right now, but we'll get there.
Honor is necessary with friendship indeed! Yes, someone out there that understands!
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I love this!
Just what I needed to see right now! A sweet write with a great pix to match. Now I can go & rest up a bit before lunch with a smile on my face. All the best in the Contest. Sweetness is so lacking in the world now & it's so wonderful to come across it in a write just when you need some!
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment. I am stoked. Sadly, what you say is true. We need more love and laughter in the world. God bless you, my friend.
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This is sweet and make a person want to be your friend. You are such a sweet person to know and I am honored to know you. great write. Very heartfelt and sweet
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Condor
In this dog-eat-dog world,
this is the cat's meow!
Great job on this.
John
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The truth about friendship is that last verse. I like the implied generosity of the writers spirit. Excellent poem and good luck in the contest
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Thank you Bob. I saw the contest and whipped this one up.
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This is so beautiful and sweet..!The title, My Friend and the last stanza means so much!
Thanks for entering the contest!!
becca!
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Thank you. I am glad you liked it.
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Awwwww. this is a beautiful write for sure. A very lovely view of your generous heart. Very nice poem, and very cute picture. My best to you in the contest. Blessings, Patty
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments always.
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