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Drop Of Gold


Like a drop of water
In search for its place
  in cobalt seas

Maintaining a calm position
  it moves in beautiful speeds
Lifting corners of many lips
  it gifts dozens, a smile

A passerby through crowds
  dripping smooth textures in hearts
  of strangers
Peacefully it flows through

  their minds and souls

Painting its serenity
  a source of refreshment for all
Its blissful touch can heal
  many physical wounds
Holy water..maybe?

A shining beauty,
  just this petty
  seed of the purest form of
  life known to us

 

She is a drop of gold

  resting with ease in 

  the darkest oceans

 

 

Author notes

Option 3 -Dedicated to Luna-Midnight (Stephanie a.k.a My Little Looney)

Hope you like it love.

Photo Credits: Deviantart.com

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    Like a drop of water
    In search for its place
    in cobalt seas

    Wow, that stanza says so much. Just fabulous. A beautiful tribute to your wonderful friend. You have great talent, my dear! Good luck in the contest!


  • chilali
    December 9, 2008

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    This is so very beautiful. I love the imagery! You are just getting better and better day by day. You have been on a writing spree while I was away too! Hehehe. Looking forward to reading your other new writes. Good luck in the contest love.

    Much love
    Ylova


  • luna-midnight gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    wow....this is amazing..and so beautiful nd wonderful
    thanks so much


  • Ken-Maverick
    December 7, 2008

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    What a lovely dedication you have penned for Steph, There's beautiful write indeed.
    How come i dont get anything like this,
    and here i thought i was your best friend
    Anyway, well done

    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken


    • Alyzeh
      December 7, 2008
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      Thank you Ken.

      You are and you will. I promise.

  • luna-midnight gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    cant wait, tell me when you are done, omg, yay...hehe awww joshie

    • Alyzeh
      December 7, 2008
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      I am done.

    • Alyzeh
      December 6, 2008
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      Hahahahhaha. I can't wait either.


      • luna-midnight gold member
        December 6, 2008
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        hehehe, yay...i want to talk to him right now! but i dont want to wake him up. lol


        • Alyzeh
          December 6, 2008
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          Awwww.. I say you go give him a kick in the butt and he's going to grab you in with him

          • luna-midnight gold member
            December 6, 2008
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            say what? hahaha...ahhhhhh! im bloated, and icky, and wahhh hahaha


            • Alyzeh
              December 6, 2008
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              No my little looney munchkin you are just whining now. I will force a sock into your mouth if you dont stop crying

              Hahhaha. I love you

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