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Fields Of Golden Hues

 

 

Green trees etched

   against sapphire skies

Meadows of bluebells

   mirrored by crystal pools.

 

Cherry blossoms

   caress the lone soul

Soft essences float

   in the air, illuminating the day.

 

Opal eyes glisten 

     at the sight

of the amber sunset.

 

Sprinkles of gold

     fall gently

on lustrous auburn hair.

 

Scarlet ribbons,

     adorned

with the finest of silk.

 

Gentle tints,

     soft pink pastels

enrich the heavens.

 

Observant eyes of gold

   watch still as torrents of

       tangerine dreams flow by.

 

 [Memories of yesterday's dreams become tomorrow's reality.]

 

A tangible, emphatic beauty.

Serenity and tranquility;

          her gifts.

 

Charms of bubbles,

    worn on ankles

         hold her guiding light,

as they rest on fields of golden hues.

 

 


 

 

Author notes

Dedicated to my adorable and beautiful little sister here on AP and also one of my first closest friends over here - Stephanie. This is for you love and I hope you enjoy it. I love youu!!!

Much love

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 13, 2008

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    OOOOOOOOOOOOO, i hope she loved this cause i know i did, amazing, simply amazing, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Kari gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    You know what? I really think that this could be made into a song with lyrics in such...
    Anyway, beautiful dedication!

    Good luck in the contest!


  • Nevel
    December 11, 2008

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    I like your usage of imagery, to me its very calmly, smoothly and softly done. The way you arraged your stanzas, as if each stanza carries its own colour


  • LionessK silver member
    December 9, 2008
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    beautiful...


  • luna-midnight gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    i dont have balck hair haha

    i coudl cry


    haha, dude, this is amazing, and the imagery is perfect
    nicely done..like thanks so much i cant believe you wrote this for me, its way to sweet and beautiful
    love you sissy thanks so much ♥


    • chilali
      December 9, 2008
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      I love youu tooo!!! And I know you do not have black hair, you are like the sprinkles of gold! Hahaha


      • luna-midnight gold member
        December 10, 2008
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        who is the black hair? hahaha

        • chilali
          December 10, 2008
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          I don't know. Could be me! Well, I have brown hair, but still. Hehe You know what I am trying to say in this poem though. Right?! Hahaha. Silly willy!!


          • luna-midnight gold member
            December 10, 2008
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            hahaha. i know some pretty evil people with black hair


            haha, what were you saying? lol


            • chilali
              December 10, 2008

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              Hehehe. I know who you're talking about. Hahaha. Should I just change that part? Haha


              • luna-midnight gold member
                December 10, 2008
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                maybe


                or ill have to die my hair "jet" *gags* black and pull it off better. haha


                • chilali
                  December 10, 2008
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                  Hehe. okay, there you go. Better?


                  • luna-midnight gold member
                    December 10, 2008
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                    hahaha, yes lovely my dear now who has the aubrun hair hahahaha


                    • chilali
                      December 10, 2008
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                      Ayayayay! You are even more cuckoo than I am! Hahaha.


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 9, 2008

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    This is a wonderful dedication. It has many dreamlike qualities. So many colours and brilliant images!

  • luna-midnight gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    i love that song, it is my funk
    haha, jk, but dude...comment back when you are done..and beatles eat my socks off!!!

    • chilali
      December 9, 2008
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      Okay. I am done! I hope you like it love. I had the perfect thing to write before you changed the prompts and the contest. Hahaha, but oh well, I hope this will do. I tried. I love youuuu!


      • luna-midnight gold member
        December 9, 2008
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        well now that its back to normally you can write what you were originally going to
        can enter 3times


        • chilali
          December 9, 2008
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          Okie dokie. I will try my best to write more! I promise!

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