Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

the dot: gaudy roll of shine and blur

slippery trail of slender noises
graze the hectic paths of the
burst of frosty calendar glamour
which crowds the trails made by
flaking drops of bright conviction
as they tremble incandescently

you might happen to take a few
blithe ganders at a fallow service
lying unbidden on the pristine floor
hydraulic cyclones gaze in monochrome
unremitting in the act of cleansing

taking down higher panes
too finely finished to
stay for time being
enough to warp
on steaming wafts
glistening with candy
stained gloss

stripped bare
minimalistic nape
breathing blessed
yet remiss and
certainly lacking
in the department
of slender fuzz

follow up
bring down
the slide
volume drops as
cream distracts
silken extract
drizzles muffled
down the now
adorned skin

halo glow
mirrored
off of
stimulated
buds of verve

drenched veins
hardly can
help it but to
immerse
partake
imbibe
engage

take a try of this

slip out of
tight skin
too crowded
where insides
know no neighbors
self lies suffocated in
the silent abyss for
lack of self vision

fall into lazy lines
with blurred edges
that bleed into
the white bliss

gray matter
trips into
stutter step
of dotted
staccato punctuation
which delineates the
fast fading passage
back to normality

not that it matters
that which leaves
no doubt of what
is old and new
the ancient
seamlessly
blends into
the sleek
form of
modern
ecstasy

pure
euphoria
at the hands
of an experienced master
the divine give only the best
and you can't dare refuse
why not sit back and
let it come over you
as it's bound to
sooner or
later

but now
the perk
and bristle
from the tense
of the anticipation
only brings the wait
to a shatteringly high
rate of prickling energy

static rings in clear tones
as harmonics open doors to
deeper levels of intense
angular sheer faces
the untouched core
now glistening with
moist condensation
gathering as the juice
glides on inward

delicious
lathering of
emblazoned
cellular delight
bubbling over
with the searing
dark heat burnt
on impact into
fused connection
of singular strands

marrow gleaning
acid swirls wink
with infinite
dexterity of
spirit and
of soul

lap the
lavish
lure

drink the
distilled
draft

sip the
sacred
spit

give up
give in
take
the
dot

Author notes

holy crap thats totally random but fairly kick ass....
loved writing it, hope you enjoy it.... tell me why and why not

A contest entry

you can call me crazy but tell me why you think so.....

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • very nice!! Beautiful true and passionate imagery. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!

  • Dude. This is completely fucked up....................and its exactly what im looking for. I love the rambling on, and wow. nice job. Good luck in my contest


  • The Otep
    December 6, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Wow..do I ever miss reading your writings! Awesome and this was one heck of a joyride!